http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/ An Imperative. Wed, 20 Aug 2008 01:56:18 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6 http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-32 Molly Mon, 21 Apr 2008 05:37:39 +0000 http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-32 Joe! This is FUN - didn't know you had it in you! Rock on. Hope to have you three out here soon... Molly Joe! This is FUN - didn’t know you had it in you!
Rock on. Hope to have you three out here soon…
Molly

]]> http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-30 dc Fri, 14 Mar 2008 05:53:41 +0000 http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-30 Nice story, bro. I thought it started a bit rough, but I was hooked only a few pages in. Good progression and char dev. Nice story, bro. I thought it started a bit rough, but I was hooked only a few pages in. Good progression and char dev.

]]> http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-28 IndieSouth Wed, 06 Feb 2008 14:24:22 +0000 http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-28 Thanks, I like this version a lot better. :) Thanks, I like this version a lot better.

]]> http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-27 Todd Lambert Tue, 05 Feb 2008 19:26:13 +0000 http://indiesouth.com/2008/02/01/coming-clean-short-story/#comment-27 Very nice. You captured the helplessness feeling quite well. Very nice. You captured the helplessness feeling quite well.

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